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Blue smoke
Body heat
Feel the rhythm through the steam
Close your eyes, you're in my dream
Never enough, more than I seem
Bursting, breaking through the dark
and every sound you hear is a spark
Every note you feel is my heart
No matter if it's flat or sharp
I don't care if you accept it
When I'm done you'll be affected
My melody is so unexpected
So strong and smooth
the river will attest
It flows like cool, cool water
against your skin when it's hotter
than your body can stand
©2008-2009 ~ravenshalom
:iconravenshalom:

Author's Comments

This poem is inspired by the pastel "Cool Heat Blue in Green" by Freya50
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:icondancingtildawn:
I like it, very sexy

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family
ravenshalom's bunny, diesseapril's kitten, penguinflavoureddoom's niisan, boot-master-sanzo's nakama

"setsunasa no kagiri made dakishimete mo itsumade mo hitotsu ni wa narenakute"
:iconravenshalom:
oh thank you my dear friend =D :hug:
:icondeathxatxdusk:
Omgosh <3
I love this Raven
^_^

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Normality is a standard for the weak
:iconravenshalom:
oh thank you so much!!!=D
:iconcuteicecream:
I like!

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Practice makes better...nobody's perfect. Look at yourself as a beautiful person! :) :noes:

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