

It's SadI think Ive had all I can take I gave you too much and that was my mistake You took for granted all the love I gave You never had to apologize, Because I justified all your mistakes I wanted your love so bad, I ignored my pain and pride Confronted by constant disappointment And no, that never did subside Hoping to manifest what I desired I put so much into the dream, But Ive become tired Of building a lie But that feels like a former life now That feels like a different time now That feels like a different me now And no, you will neverIt's Sad


Asking QuestionsHow many words does it takeAsking Questions
to find out theres nothing more left to say? How many combinations of rhymes
to realize that after all of this time Ive said it all Ive rhymed them all The strongest fall and I have watched them crawl
why is making money success? even if theres only unhappiness? even if a mans life is a mess? and his whole life his feelings are repressed? I watch him crawl
Into a denial where theres no escape at all
Why must I swallow all that I write? Because Im criticized even though


My Message to the WorldI want to write something uplifting Because I know something is missing And Im beginning to see the change It looks like its about to rain Love is water Oil is pain When you put them together They only separate And Im beginning to understandMy Message to the World
That there could be a greater plan Greater than what I could design I have this feeling in my mind Of an emotional place It is not an escape But something we could create Because I cant trust or accept What is in front of me You cannot grasp reality It


These Words Are for UThese words are for you I know that theyre not new that they only come through On lines of paper and ink thats blue But I promise you they are true As true as my intentions I know sometimes I forget to mention How much you mean to me How thankful I truly am For every day we have together After all the rainy days weve weathered It feels good to sit in the sun together Feeling the sand beneath our feet Watching the waves undulate Rhythmically, spontaneously We pontificate the ephemerality of lifeThese Words Are for U
Watching it crash into the sand &nb
Devious Comments
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My art is the world as I think that the world has to be
I agree, it was nice to meet you, and I am pleased to have access to your poetry, which is quite palatable, especially considering I'm not big into poetry.
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--Faile35
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My art is the world as I think that the world has to be
Dad wanted us to meet for quite some time now, but I am glad that it finally happened
it is hard to meet people with all of these qualities; and it is great that she is supportive of your art and creativity
a lot of people do not "get" art and the desire to be creative and it is great that she does and encourages you to explore your creativity
A lot of my poetry does rhyme though...
I also like to play around with internal rhyming so pay attention to that as I like to "sneak" it in
so as far as my "writing style" goes it is simplistic
I have been writing poetry since I was about 12 so my writing style has gone through different stages...
for a long time it was very dense, difficult, and metaphorical
nowadays I have something to say
and would rather have my voice heard than having it become lost behind the walls I would have to hide behind
I prefer being naked and exposed, but understood
...yes, I know, I'm a neanderthal...
It was nice to see you this past weekend.
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--Faile35
Joy
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"If people could put rainbows in zoos, they'd do it."
-Hobbes
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"If people could put rainbows in zoos, they'd do it."
-Hobbes
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